Anthony M George (Atamask)
Animator | Illustrator
Awesome perspective on the jumping figure on the first page! You have a very distinctive, expressive style and it translates well to the subject matter. I would just keep on pushing the dynamic poses you captured with these larpers, and keep experimenting with perspective and interesting angles.
Didn't know you were watching the legend of Korra when you're drawing this, its overall is alright but when you try to draw people with the back facing you, it looks out of proportion, its like they were being lifted into mid air and have their body bend backward, may be you should try to draw the stick figure frame for it first before you goes into the details,